Wow, I have to say that I am not totally into the "lovey-dovey" genre, but I really enjoyed this. Nice writing!:)
This turned out to be a really lovely piece. Voted :)
I have a question for you then, Pamel
I am not afraid of lightning but I decided this character would. Do you think I caught the feeling and emotion well? Do you think I need improvement?
And suggestions would be greatly appreciated :D