BookRix

A lovely written work, showing how even in those we love, we can fear to trust

Wow, I have to say that I am not totally into the "lovey-dovey" genre, but I really enjoyed this. Nice writing!:)

You have so much potential with your writing!! I can not wait to read more and see what happens next! I love books about love stories and you have got a great one in the making!!

to vote...love happy endings...p

good luck :)

This turned out to be a really lovely piece. Voted :)

I have a question for you then, Pamel

I am not afraid of lightning but I decided this character would. Do you think I caught the feeling and emotion well? Do you think I need improvement?

And suggestions would be greatly appreciated :D

cool

It moved along and I was finished to soon. Good job. Serena

Nice, Renaldowen. Nice writing!