You should write because you love the shape of stories and sentences and the creation of different words on a page. Writing comes from reading, and reading is the finest teacher of how to write.
Annie Proulx
I want to know you more,
I thought...I had clue of you,
And It broke me all over again,
My heart ripped,
Tears raced down my cold cheek,
You kept the demons of my life at bay...
How could I've missed this?
To know, to feel, so much love impeccably unconditional,
How could I've missed such glorious beauty?
Your love only made me stronger and brighter,
There's no greater love worth dying for,
Oh Jesus its only you-its only you,
My Father,... Show more
Thanks for adding my book to your Favorites - I look forward to your comments! ')
If you are reading this post, please don't spam me regularly. "I will delete you."
"Some secrets are best kept within know whom to trust, Snakes are not worms."
© DEU' Angel
To be whole
© DEU' Angel
All of Life is within me,
All of me is within Life......
I do not need to pretend to know I'm imperfect,
But to find my true self,
Broken, cut, damaged,
This outward circumstance keeps me in the shadows.......
A little piece of me gone,
Oh I yearn to be fixed,
To have and to crave wholeness,
They say none is,
I desire to be perfect,
To be made whole.
My missing piece became my dark side,
To see where lies my faith,
I... Show more
the only way a man can be close to perfect is to walk in the spirit of God . Man's ways are not the ways of God, The whole book of the Bible concludes in three words Love thy Neighbors . bless those that curse you and if your enemies thirst give him water. violence is never the... Show more
Stolen Waters
This eye can tell a story;
I can't say sorry for every single thing I did,
I could yield to reason,
yet again.........
Found my way into its depths,
To feel pleasure,
Then to know suffering, struggle and defeat.
It's taste sweet as nectar,
Beautiful flower, Blossoming day and night,
Wrestling yet so gently,
Playing to its tunes,
The seduction of my soul,
To stop........
But fall reaching the bottom of a fiery-red abyss.
© DEU' Angel
pm me lol
Of all the books on your "Favorites" list, you've only bothered to leave one very brief remark on someone else's story. We all need reviews. One of the purposes of this site is getting the input and insight other writers offer.
If you want reviews, start giving some, and more... Show more
Of all the books on your "Favorites" list, you've only bothered to leave one very brief remark on someone else's story. We all need reviews. One of the purposes of this site is getting the input and insight other writers offer.
If you want reviews, start giving some, and more than just a quick sentence indicating that you liked it. A review includes way more than that. I'd be happy to take the time to read and review your stories if you would at least try to give the rest of us the same courtesy.
Thanks for understanding.
Thank you for the information Judy.....I understand clearly
Deu' take this as a constructive criticism review. You need an editor or more eyes to look at your book and point out the things that need some fixing before placing them for sale. Readers these days want, if not perfect, a good product in their hands.
thank you Alpha